Winter is definitely here, so all I wanna do is curl up under a comfy afghan, with my feet in fuzzy socks, and a cup of coffee+cocoa in my hands (one of my own inventions; might share the recipe one day!)... and I want good stuff to read! Anything to take my mind off the cold and super-lashing rain beating down my window panes. Just as well it's time for Six Sentence Sunday, innit?
Speaking of SSS, this week's excerpt should answer the questions that arose in previous weeks' snippets. (And check out the gorgeous cover Fiona Jayde, the Noble Romance cover artist, did for me! That's Rayne on there, in a pose that totally sums the tone of her characterisation in the book. The lower part of the cover is an image of a sunrise over Charles Bridge, in the center of Prague, where a pivotal part of the book takes place. Anyhow...)
Remember - Ash, the paramedic, has been called to attend to the victims of a drunken brawl. While there, he witnesses a man hit a woman right in front of everyone. Always the knight in shining armour, Ash jumps to her defense... only to find a strange, uncanny resemblance between this girl, Irina, and his childhood best friend, Rayne, whom he hasn't seen in 17 years.
Who is Irina, really?
'...
From the front-facing window on the second floor of
the Shepherd's Close freehold, Corpus
secret agent Rayne Cheltham watched the ambulance pull away from the curb.
Shivers crept up her arms, and she hugged herself
tight to ward them off—Get a grip!
She was a professional on an assignment, an elite,
trained operative from a clandestine agency that handled operations for
governments and international forces as a stealthy left hand—her agency
entrusted her with the most important missions; nothing should faze her.
Before today, she would've said that nothing could
affect her when she had her eyes on a goal.
But she wasn't sure anymore—she'd never had her past
collide with her present like a few moments ago, in the form of her childhood
best friend.
Ashford Gilfoy, better known as Ash; the boy who had
been there to catch her when, at six, she had slipped while climbing the chestnut
tree that sat right on the border between their two houses in Hastings, two
days after her family moved there from Salisbury; the boy who had taught her
how to ride a bicycle without the training wheels on the long and winding,
gravel-covered lane leading to her parents' mansion; the teenager who had
smashed the nose of the first lad who had broken her heart, at thirteen, during
recess in the schoolyard; the young man she had left seventeen years ago on a
platform at London Waterloo, on the day she bid her old life goodbye. ...'
Catch the rest of the SSS posse over at the official list - and don't forget to check out the surefire goodies to be found at the blogs of Jessica E. Subject, Siobhan Muir, Lorraine Paton, Wildcat's Wife, JM Blackman, Elin Gregory, Angela Quarles, & Sue of Sassyspeaks, among many others!
Hope you're having lovely (& warm!) weekend. I'm all abuzz here because Before The Morning (Corpus Brides: Book 2) is scheduled for release tomorrow, May 7... if everything goes as planned *touch wood*
Thanks for dropping by today; double thanks + XOXO if you leave a comment.
From Mauritius with love,
Zee

60 comments:
Wow,that's quite a history. I suspect there will be lots of sparks between these two.
It's a gorgeous cover.
I love these two characters, and this story! Can't wait to read it again. All the best with your release tomorrow! Woot! :)
Beautiful cover! And I loved the six!
Really enjoyed your six. Felt like I got to know your character.
I will add that you packed a lot into your six -- you practically have a whole chapter! LOL
Gorgeous cover! And this six has me wondering why she's "hiding" from him. Can't wait to read more!
There's so much history there for her. I'm glad it's equal on both sides because it is clearly something that still strikes her to the core. I thought it very poignant.
Wow, they definitely have a history and it's definitely starting a new chapter. Great snippet and sounds like a fantastic story.
Love the cover and you six!
I've said this before - love your descriptive sentences. These six says so much (beautiful spring day here but I am at the computer for now...)
They definitely have a lot of history and memories between them. I love where you're headed with this. And the cover is striking!
Jess, definitely a lot of sparks between them! Their meeting again will be sizzling :)
This is my kind of story! Can't wait to read it! Fantastic six!
Thanks Jessica! I'm on pins and needles here, wondering if I'll even be able to sleep tonight :) Can't wait for you to see the final version of this one! XOXO
Thanks Lisa! :)
Lol Cara - yep, that was a wallop to pack into the six. But I did it, *grins* Glad you felt in touch with Rayne here. This is the first lines from her POV in the story, so I hoped she came across 'well'. :)
Thanks Sarah! Okay, *secret's out* the whole of Chapter 1 will be up on here tomorrow, to celebrate the book's release. You'll get your answer then, I believe :)
JM, yes, it's a loaded moment for both of them, that pivotal instant where their lives change... Glad it came across as poignant :) XOXO
Thank you, Gem! Yes, loaded history for them both, and definitely a new beginning :)
Thanks Krystal! :)
Awww, thank you, Sue! Hope you got to enjoy your beautiful spring day :) xoxo
Thanks Mae! I really took a turn down Memory Lane with these two, exploring their history :)
Lol - Thanks Jennifer! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on it :)
Their paths meet again. I like stories with old friends/romances. The history and memories -- ah!!!!
I love the way you've given us so much about their history in so few sentences. But who is Irina??? Way to keep us hanging, Zee! :)
Great six and congratulations on the release.
Yes! Two strong characters and an uncompromising goal. This is gonna be a good one!
Oh cool, this story gets more and more interesting with each snippet! Love her rundown of their history. And gorgeous cover!!
Wow sounds like he was a pretty important person in her life but how sad that she hadn't seen him 17 years!
I love your six! And, I'm happy we finally get to meet her! (I checked out your trailer so I had an idea... Great trailer BTW!)
I love how you've shown so much of the history between them, it makes me excited for when they get together.
And, you are wonderful for mentioning me! :) Thank you.
Congrats on your release tomorrow!
Those two have a history together! Hope they'll be reunited!
He represents a big part of her past. Can't wait to see how she handles this.
Great six - love the past colliding with the present (coincidentally just as it does in my six today also!)
Nice cover, Zee! Engaging six too! I want to know what happens next between these two!
Great six as always Zee...your writing is always so fluid and easy to read :)
So much history between them! I suspect we'll see a lot more in the coming pages. Hope so, anyway. I like these two. :)
Nice! It's hot as...Texas where I am :)
I love when past friends and/or lovers come back into the picture. Always makes for some amazing sparks. Can't wait to read more!
Wow, what a history between the two of them. I love when an old flame starts to reignite. :)
Wildcat's Wife - yes, their paths meet again! I too love stories of reunion between past lovers/old friends. Had a blast with these two :)
LOL Kate - more about "Irina" next week (Already posted a 'chapter' here today; the next six explains it all) :)
Thanks Babette! :)
Lol, thanks Monica! It's my favourite story to date; haven't felt as 'rocked' by my characters as I've been in this one, and I so cannot wait to share it with the world! :)
Thanks Angela! I wanted to keep the stakes going up and up the more we go into the chapter. Glad if I managed that :)
Lila, he was pretty important indeed, the most important part of her life even. But he never wanted them to be more than friends, which broke her heart...
Lol Lorraine - yup, the trailer does 'give it away' :) It'll be explosive when they get together, I can promise that! XOXO
J.C, they will be reunited, soon too, but not exactly in the way either hoped... :)
Cate, she'll be on the rocks for a while thanks to meeting him again :)
Paula, lol - indeed, that was the theme of your six this week too. :) Don't you just love these stories that stir up the past?
Thanks Nichelle! :)
Awww, so sweet of you, Christine! xoxo
Dianne, definitely a boatload of history between them. We're just skimming the surface here, and everything in the story is tied to their past together... :)
Lol Rashda! Send some heat, me feet are freezing here! :)
Tonya, that's what I love about those stories too: the sparks, the longing, buried feelings coming to the fore! :)
Sadie, indeed a lot of history! Theirs will be a slow, all-consuming burn :)
Grats on the release!!! WOOOOT
and loved your snippet ;) two very strong characters, and I'm a sucker for couples with a history together xx
Lovely cover and WOW, what a MASSIVE six sentences! Brilliant. That filled us in on a lot of what we needed to know.
Thanks JoAnne! Yep, two very strong characters - there's gonna be a battle of wills in this one! :)
Thank you, Elin! Glad this excerpt 'answered' the questions asked previously :)
As always a great six, I just loving coming and reading your posts Zee!
Thanks, Alisha! xoxo
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