It's a cool, calm, and sombre Sunday morning here in Mauritius. Fall is definitely upon us, and if I don't want to fall too and lose what remains of my sanity... let's just say - I need a hero, stat!
And, hey - just the thing too: it's time for Six Sentence Sunday, and we can go back to my current hero, Ash Gilfoy, 'played' by the uber-handsome & super-sexy Josh Holloway (yes, yes, it's him right there! This is what my heroic London ambulance worker looks like *grin*).
What's been happening so far? Well, Ash has been called, totally randomly of course, to a domestic accident site to respond to a distress call after a fight has erupted among participants of a drunken party. But all's not as it seems, and Ash's protective instincts shot high when he witnessed an argument between a couple. And then all hell broke loose when the man punched the woman to her temple, right there in front of everyone...
Ash is a hero; no doubt about that. What's he going to do?
'...
In a precarious position with one foot on the edge of
the step, she reeled from the blow; Ash charged up the stairs two by two, and
caught her in his arms. He took her whole weight on; his back crashed into the
three-foot tall, carved stone banister as he braced her with one arm around her
waist.
Sharp pain, like licks of scorching fire, erupted
along his spine, and he let out a breath. With his free hand, he reached for
the banister and gripped the edge hard to stop their fall - his fingers hurt, as
if the bones splintered under the harsh pressure, and the skin of his palm
stung and burned where it had chafed against the coarse rock. But what mattered
was that he had caught her before she rolled head first down the steep flight.
Her limp body thumped into his like dead weight, and
when he managed to breathe without feeling flames of agony sear up his back, he
lowered them both onto the steps.
...'Catch the rest of the SSS crew over at the list today - and don't forget to check out the excerpts from Jessica E. Subject, Sarah Ballance, Siobhan Muir, Lorraine Paton, Jennifer Lowery, and Carrie Ann Ryan... among the 100+ fab authors listing their six this week. :)
Thanks for dropping by, peeps, and double thanks+XOXO if you leave me a comment.
Have a lovely Sunday!
From Mauritius with love,
Zee

46 comments:
I love your descriptions! A fabulous six from a fabulous story. ;) And Josh is the perfect inspiration for Ash Gilfoy.
Yep, Ash is a hero alright! Great descriptions, Zee!
As always, excellent description of the action. Yep, he's definite hero material!
Great visceral descriptions of his rescue! Felt like I was doing it!
Fantastic description, powerful!
Fast paced and descriptive as always. Loved it- and the pic!
I love it. Oh so very heroic. Great six.
Wow... Every Six Sunday post I've read today has been wonderful, but I think I found the winner. What a great excerpt, love a strong and gentle hero. Great six!
Thanks Jessica! Lol, he was the perfect inspiration for this hero :) xoxo
Thanks Kate! :)
Awww, thank you Cate! And I think I'm in love with Ash... :)
Thanks Angela! That was what I set out to do - bring the reader right into the moment, second by second. :)
Thanks Gemma! :)
Lol Sherry - the pic didn't hurt :) Glad you liked it and the excerpt XOXO
Thanks Joanne! Like I said, I'm in love with him :)
Thank you, Carmen! That is so sweet of you! :)
I've only read a few sixes so far featuring Josh but I think I'm in love with him. :-) Very heroic guy and you write him so well. Absolutely love this, Zee!
Ouch! that hurt - he's so strong.. and your visuals is like i am right there
Talk about quick on his feet! He just jumped into action! Great six, Zee--you do awesome with action.
Is there anything better than a self-sacrificing hero? I think not. :D
Such rich detail. Fantastic.
My gosh. Such detail in your action scene. You've written a hero with tenacity.
That's an excellent description of a fast rescue!
Thanks Mae! I think I feel in love with Ash the minute he happened into my mind. He was always this strong, honourable guy, totally heroic :)
Thanks Sue - good to know I managed to put you right there in the action! :) xoxo
He did jump into action, JM! No time to waste :) Glad you thought the action played out well. XOXO
I totally agree, Monica! :)
Thank you, Cara! :)
Lol Wildcat's Wife - I try my best to visualize a scene, and then transfer it in as much detail as possible to paper :)
Oh well done. I like it when there are consequences to physical heroism.
Thanks Paula! :)
Thanks Elin! I wanted this to be realistic, yet heroic :)
What a fab six! I love the description. I could see, feel and hear it perfectly. Great job!
Wow! I could feel everything he did! Intense six!
Aww, Ash is a true hero. Love him!
Great description, I can feel what he's experiencing! Oh, and, BTW, I love him! ;)
Thank you for the mention! :)
Oh yes, a genuine hero for sure. Great six, Zee.
And thanks so much for the mention, m'dear! :)
Siobhan
Thanks DeAnna! Glad the description worked! :)
*grin* Jennifer! Happy it worked :)
Innit, Tonya? I'm so in love with him too! :)
Thanks Lorraine, and he's 'easy' to love, innit? You're most welcome about the mention :)
Yes, yes, Siobhan - a genuine hero indeed! I wanted readers to fall in love with him first, before they get to meet the heroine :)
XOXO, you're welcome for the mention.
Wow this has a very oooOOOooo feeling lol ... don't blame me on that description it was the best I could come up with! I loved it ... great 6!
Lol - thank you Alisha! :)
I just love that you posted a pic of Josh...it made the visual so much more fun! Great six. :-)
Lol Teresa! A visual is worth a thousand words, innit? :) Thanks for dropping by
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