Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - Walking The Edge: Snippet #23

Hey beautiful people

It's a pleasant but bittersweet Sunday morning for me right now - as I was putting this post together, I learned one of my uncles just passed away after a lengthy struggle against cancer. It's news that hits home even more given that I'm a cancer survivor too, and he and I actually went in together one day at the hospital, back to back, to see our oncologist.

I'm saddened, and the news left me reeling... but life goes on anyhow, and we all gotta do what we gotta do to move along.

So I'd already signed up for Six Sentence Sunday, and I didn't want to leave anyone in the lurch (and also not put up my link up when I signed up, which to me, amounts to giving my word).

Last week, we were in that hotel room in Marseille, this couple in total lust against the velvet-panelled wall. Heat flared up, fast. Will they follow upon this fire that blazed... give in to their desire for one another...? Read on for today's six:


'...
Bracing his hands on her ribcage, he pinned her to the wall. She understood what he wanted, and in the blink of an eye, her legs came up, brushing feverishly against his hips, then straddling his waist. Standing like that, his body aligned with her core, and with a none-too-gentle push, he swiftly entered her.

Even with her face buried in the crook of his collarbone, he heard the moan she tried to stifle. Her soft, velvety lips trailed up his skin to settle on the pulse beating frantically in his neck. Her tongue darted out to caress the throbbing vein, and she rocked her lower body against his. ...'


Thanks for coming over, and double thanks if you leave me a comment. You know these little words you leave me tide me into the week, right? :)

Don't forget to check out the other Six Sunday posters here - I guarantee there are some amazing reads in that list.

Hope you're all having a lovely Sunday.

From Mauritius with love,

Zee

52 comments:

Alix said...

'Her soft, velvety lips trailed ..' beautifully written six!

Jessica Subject said...

Sorry to hear about your uncle. Hugs

A HOT six! Well, the entire story is hot and a great adventure. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Alix. :)

Zee Monodee said...

And thank you, Jessica, aka this story's No1 fan :) xoxo

Taryn Kincaid said...

So sorry for your loss.

Nicely steamy six; like how in tune with each other they are.

(And thank you for recognizing who Aidon & Stef are based on!)

Rebecca Royce said...

Z-SO sorry for your loss. Thank you for these 6. Great writing.

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Taryn.

Yup, these two are definitely two lovers reuniting, hence why they're in tune. :)

I love that storyline you're pursuing - can't wait to see how you'll write it xoxo

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Rebecca :) Nice to have you over

Graylin Fox said...

My condolences honey. You have my shoulder any time you need it.

And now, O.O Hot scene!

Graylin

Lisa Fox said...

I'm so sorry for your loss.

I love your very HOT six!

Cherie Marks said...

Really sorry to hear about your uncle. {{Big Hug}}

Loving this six! Very sensual.

Gem Sivad said...

Zee, sorry to hear about your uncle. Your six this week is sexxxxy, though.

Layna Pimentel said...

I sorry for you loss hon! ((hugs))

Wonderful six, though. Super hot!

Jessica K said...

Beautifully written scene, just restrained enough. You're quite a trooper to post after such news. My condolences. Take care.

sue said...

I can see and feel this scene, so well done.
My uncle died last year - just as we were getting closer too. My sympathies to you (and huge hugs)

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Graylin. I guess we all don't realise yet that he's no longer with us... Sad

Glad you liked the scene though :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Lisa :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you, Cherie *hug back*

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks, Gem. Yep, sexy 6, innit? :)

Zee Monodee said...

And thank you, Layna. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Jessica. I admit I debated whether to post, but I know the right thing, the real tribute, would be to get on with life. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you, Sue. I know what you mean - we were starting to get close too, our common brush with cancer putting us together beyond that line that only patients cross. Hugs back :)

Siobhan Muir / Meg Palevich said...

Oh, Zee, blessings to you and your family. Thank you for coming through on your word. Your six was smokin' and loved that they were too far gone to deal with foreplay. Well done. :)

Misa said...

Sizzling!

Jayel Kaye said...

My heartfelt condolances for your loss and you are right... life and writing does go on.

I enjoyed the six, keep writing on.

Sarah Ballance said...

Zee, I am so sorry for your loss, and what a bond the two of you must have had. I almost feel guilty commenting on your six, but i will tell you, girl, it's HOT. ((hugs)))

Lex Valentine said...

I like him more and more with each of your posts!

Aimee Laine said...

And we pretty much can picture what happens next! ;) LOL

Guilie said...

Zee, how lovely! And the beautiful way you described her mouth on his throat--masterful, sweetheart.

I'm so sorry about the bad news you received today. I send you a tight and long ciber-hug.

Krystal Wade said...

HOT! Very, very hot.

mirriamsmyth said...

Hot and intense six! Great imagery here :)

J.M. Blackman said...

Evening, Zee. I'm sorry to hear about your uncle. I just lost mine a few months ago. It says a lot about you that you still put together your post and took the time to comment on others; and as always, your six is wonderfully written and easy to sink into. Sweet, sensual and simple. Great six.

Tmonique said...

Whew!! Got me all hot and bothered! Loved it

Stephanie Adkins said...

Dayyuuummm...that's HOT, Zee! I love it! Can't wait for next week! Happy Sunday!

christine warner said...

You never disappoint Zee...very sensual and sexy..loved your six :)

Vivien Dean said...

So very sensual! Well done!

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Siobhan. :) Yup, too far gone indeed.

Glad I went through with the posting - grown addicted to SSS *hugs*

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Misa :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you, Jayel :)

Zee Monodee said...

*grin* Sarah. Yes, it was a unique bond, and I'll cherish that always.

Glad you liked the six :) xo

Zee Monodee said...

Lol Lex - he's very 'likable' :)

Zee Monodee said...

Lol Aimee - indeed! The scene concludes next week :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you, Guilie. Hugs back

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Krystal :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you Mirriam. Glad you liked it :)

Zee Monodee said...

Jalisa, sorry for your loss too. That kinda resonates all through you, innit?

Glad you enjoyed the excerpt. :) Hugs

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Tmonique. Nice to see you over here :)

Zee Monodee said...

Lol. Thanks Stephanie. The scene concludes next week, so stay tuned for that 'ending' :)

Zee Monodee said...

Awww, thank you Christine *hugs*

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Vivien :)

Angela Guillaume said...

So sorry about your loss, Zee. It is never easy to face these challenges in life.

But these six certainly make up for that. They are smokin'!!! Hot and passionate - very evocative. Well done as always, sister xoxo

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Angela *hugs*

Glad you could come over, sweetie. XOXO

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