Sunday, May 01, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hello beautiful people!!

Sunday again, and I'm once more on the Six Sentence Sunday bandwagon.

I met so many great people last week and can only hope this will be the case again this time. I'm looking forward to trolling the SSS list and discovering lots of astounding gems among the authors and authors' works posted.

So, without further ado, here's today's tidbit. Last week, my excerpt dipped into the heroine's POV, to shed some light about her thoughts on the hero. I'll turn the tables today, and give you a piece of the hero's POV, what he's thinking about this woman when she walks into his life again.

Excerpt taken from Chapter 1, which opens in the hero's POV.

"...Her voice was throaty, cautious. None of the girlish high pitch of the Kel he’d known remained in her tone. He’d been with her a little under two decades ago – that would make her about thirty-five today, the same age as he. An adult, a grown woman, sophisticated and worldly. Nothing like a bright-eyed teenager spending her first summer in Martha’s Vineyard.
No, he didn’t know the person she had become..."

Looking forward to your thoughts. :)

Have a great Sunday.

From Mauritius with love,

Zee

30 comments:

Viviane Brentanos said...

Very nice and leaves me wanting to know more

Cate Masters said...

Sounds like he's interested in getting to know her again though! Nice description.

Theresa Stillwagon said...

Love the excerpt. Intriguing.

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you Viviane! I was hoping this excerpt would whet up the appetite. :)

Thanks for coming over. Hugs!

Zee Monodee said...

Lol Cate! Yup, against his will, and better judgement, he'll want to get to know her again.

Thanks for dropping by. Hugs!

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you Theresa!

Hugs

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Great snippet!

JoAnne Kenrick said...

Yeay -- welcome to Six Sunday, Zee. I didn't do it last week, so had no idea you'd joined in :)

Love your six. Nice reflection on what was, and what isn't today, but hinting at what might be tomorrow. Hope this is leading up to re-sparking a few old flames ;)

Sarah Grimm said...

Great six! Sounds like he's interested in knowing the woman she's become.

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Carolyn!

Zee Monodee said...

Hey JoAnne! Yup, joined the bandwagon finally, and it's been so much fun. :)

Yes, indeed - this is the sparking of old flames. Will be some push, pull, & tug before they both let this happen, but it's not easy battling Fate.

Thanks for coming over! Hugs

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Sarah! Yup, he's interested all right. He doesn't want to, but he is intrigued, and everyone knows it's hard to forget your first love. :)

Rebecca Royce said...

Beautiful, beautiful descriptive language!

Susanna Fraser said...

Nice introduction to both characters.

Taryn Kincaid said...

Oh, I love a good reunion story. Especially when they're no longer the kids they once were!

Joyce Lansky said...

Makes me wonder what makes Kel this new person. He's a guy so logic says he'd probably done something.

Thanks for stopping by my blog.

Joyce
http://joycelansky.blogspot.com

Gem Sivad said...

I missed last weeks but liked this six too much to miss it, so scrolled down.

I'll be back for more!

Lindsay said...

The hook at the end adds intrigue. Love it.

Sandy Nachlinger said...

You did a nice job of presenting a little bit of history here, plus a hint of the future. I'm looking forward to more.

Verna Authors said...

Extremely well written!

AllureVanSanz said...

Ohh Lost love?

I like rekindling stories.

Well done.

All my best,
Allure Van Sanz

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you, Rebecca! This means so much coming from you. :)

Hugs

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Susanna. I go into more detail in the story, and it's so, so hard to find those 'perfect' 6 sentences for this post.

Zee Monodee said...

Taryn,

That's exactly it - I love the new dimension age and maturity brings.

There's quite a twist to this tale - I think I'll put that revelation up as SSS next week. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Lol Joyce. Actually, he's the innocent party in here. I like playing with 'expected' developments and Kel is the only one responsible for becoming this new woman. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you Gem! Glad you could drop by. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thanks Lindsay. Glad the hook worked. :)

Zee Monodee said...

Thank you Sandy. Glad the past, present, and future came across these few lines.

Zee Monodee said...

Verna,

Thank you! That's an amazing compliment!

Zee Monodee said...

Allure,

It's definitely lost love and rekindling romance. There's a twist to the tale - I'm prolly gonna post that up next week. :)

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